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Field of Daisies

Updated: Sep 3

I run to the field, a trail of sunlight chasing me.


Whispering sweet melodies, the cricket strums its love song for a nearby bee. Lying here, encased in pollen, I hope they fly over and choose me. With closed eyes, my arm rises to the sky, floating gracefully. It's easy to pretend I am but a daisy.


Letting my mind escape this body, and for a moment, one softly lands on me. The delicate tip-tap of its legs and the angelic flutter of its wings. I'll stay as still as a weeping willow. My heart begins thumping loudly in my chest, begging for you to stay with every beat.


Ever so abruptly, a gust of wind strips the remaining pollen from me. Now I lie here in this field of daisies, and you decide to leave. I watch you float to the others just as quickly as you came to me. All of these beautiful daisies swaying so gently, as if it's a dance. I suppose it's silly of me to think I ever had much of a chance.


Lying in this field of daisies, yet now I notice all of the dirt, the itching, and the nearby car horn, driving me crazy. The pollen is now making me sneeze. For that, I thank the breeze. When all feels lost and a tear escapes my watering eye, out jumps a stranger no bigger than the tears I cry.


The cricket rests on my knee, tapping his foot to the beat of the rustle in the leaves. He's dancing now. I can't help but wonder, maybe his song was always for me.



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4 Comments


Guest
Jul 24

Great job creating this scene. I can imagine the maiden in the picture softly giggling at the touch of the cricket on her nose. The mild whimper when he leaves and then another giggle upon the arrival of the stranger.

Your words and your art wonderfully communicate what’s on your mind.

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I deeply cherish the emotion you conveyed in your message. Art truly is magical—the way each viewer brings their unique perspective and finds their own meaning, yet somehow the essence of the work still connects.

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Guest
Jul 23

I love this! I really felt transported to that field of daisies! I also really enjoyed the ways you personified those friendly bugs!

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Thank you Dearest Reader 😁 Inspiration hits me as I drive past fields of flowers, each fighting for their own place in the sun while the breeze proves to be too much for them to stand up tall.

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